UC知道哪位英语强人帮忙修改下这篇文章，看看有哪些错误 (代问)
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In the past,there were few buildings in the cities,which were very small and simple.In the conuntryside,farmers only planted several kinds of greens and grain.
it's easy to imagine that the life in that time is really hard.
But today,everyting goes different.huge buildings have been set up in the cities.And in the field,it's hard to know how many produce were growing.Also,we can see the famers with the smiles.
that's to say,all aspects of our life differ from that time.We Chinese are getting richer,our country China is getting stronger.
较明显的地方建议修改如下：
0. It's30 years since policy of reform and opening-up began --- It's30 years since the implementation of the policy of reform and opening-up.
1. deeply changes -deep changes
2. only planted several kinds of greens and grain -- only planted limited kinds of crops
3. it's easy to imagine that the life in that time is really hard. -- it's easy to imagine that life then was really hard.
4. everyting goes different- things are different
5. And in the field,it's hard to know how many produce were growing -- And in the fields,it's hard to know how many kinds of crops are growing
6. that's to say,all aspects of our life differ from that time.--- So we can see that quite many (因为你只讲了城市和乡村）aspects of our life have changed greatly.
7. We Chinese are getting richer, and our country is getting stronger.
恩,同上...........
deeply in line2should be replaced b