英语改错!!!

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Eddie liked music very much.After leaving in
a medical college he went to work in hospital.
There he found that a lot of patient were happier
and caused little trouble if pleasant music was
playing to them.So,when he began to work in his
office he had a recorder playing beautiful music
to keep his patients happy.A morning soon after
the recorder has been played,a woman,who was
sitting in the crowded waiting room,she complained,
"We'er all waiting here to see the doctor
while he just playing the violin in hes office
instead of doing his medical work."

2楼的改个P 一个字没变 没见过这么不要脸的

改为
Eddie likes music very much.
After medical college he went to work in hospital.
He found a lot of patients would be happier
and caused less trouble if pleasant music was
playing to them.

So, he began to work in his office he had a recorder playing beautiful music to keep his patients happy.

A morning soon after the recorder had been played,a woman,who was sitting in the crowded waiting room,she complained,
"We'er all waiting here to see the doctor
while he just playing the violin in hes office
instead of doing his medical work."

Eddie liked music very much. After his graduation in
a medical college he worked in a hospital.
There he found that many patients were happier
and had little trouble if pleasant music was
played to them. So, when he began to work in his
office he had a recorder playing beautiful music
to keep his pat