请问这几句英文怎么写

thanks, I am very happy to hear from you, I am 24 years old,I think you have already in 越南,and you should take care of yourself. you should not pay more attention to the language,because Children would receive your empressement by your smile.

给加点分吧。呵呵。谢谢了。

Thank you. It is happy to receive your letter. I am 24 years old. Are you in Vietnam? Take care of yourself. Don't mind the language problerms and your empressment can be feeled by the children.Let the smile make up this.

谢谢你 很高兴收到你的信，我24岁了。已经在越南了吧，要注意安全。不要太在意语言问题了，因为你的真诚孩子们一定可以感受到，用微笑去弥补这些.
Thank you, I am very glad to hear from you. I am 24 now. I think you must be in Vietnam at present, please do take care of yourself. And also please donot think too much about language barrier since your children will feel you true heart through your smile.