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My name is Alison ,i'm 21 years old .I'm from liaoning , i graduated from senior high school .I have an outgoing personality .
I also have a large number of interests in travelling sporting playing and so on . My hobby is math ,but i hard to improving my english by myself .I told myself if i do ,i'll do the best .
I believe that Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind on it .
thanks

适当的地方帮我多添加点精彩语句谢谢了

My name is Alison ,I'm 21 years old .I was born in (come from) Liaoning .When I graduated from senior middle school,I chose to work in the society .
Years of experience has made me smarter than before.I am interested in travelling, sporting and so on .I like math when I was young ,but my english is so poor that I couldn't improve it myself.For years,I have told myself if I have a chance to do anything ,I'll try my best.
I believe ,there is no difficult in the socity if I contribute myself on it.
That's all,thank you.

先纠正一些语法错误比较好.

My name is Alison ,i'm 21 years old and come from liaoning , i graduated from senior high school .I have an outgoing personality . not only do I feel good about travlling but also get to spend time playing sports
I love math very much,but I find it hard to improving my english by myself .i will try my best to face the challenge(原句是病句)
I believe that Nothing is impossile in the world if you try yo