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I’m very happy that can write my dream room. This is my dream room. I hope that one day it would be turning real. My dream room don’t need too big. The wall color of the room is yellow. Because yellow is my favorite color. It can give people a feeling of warm. That kind of feeling like the sun, like a lamp in darkness. In the bedroom, there is a beautiful light made from crystal. I like many different kinds of thing made from crystal. Especially the crystal lamp. It can give me a world which is filling magic. In this world, I will buy a lot of cups, different kinds of material, different kinds of size, and different kinds of colors. It makes me so excited. I will leave the biggest space for my clothes. In this space, I will make four wardrobes for my clothes, and a big mirror with them. I will use a wall to make the shoes cabinet, puts all of my shoes. There is a beautiful toilet table behind them. The toilet table includes all of my glasses, sun glasses, and jewelry and so on. It is m

大致改了下语法和习惯用语：
I’m very happy to introduce you to my dream room. I hope that one day it would be become real. My dream room doesn’t need to be too big. The color of the wall is yellow, since it is my favorite color. Yellow can give people a warm feeling, which likes the Sun, or a lamp in darkness. In the bedroom, there is a beautiful light made from crystal. I like things made from crystal, especially crystal lamp. It can give me a world full of magic. In this world, I will also buy a lot of cups with different kinds of materials, sizes, and colors. It makes me so excited. I will leave the biggest space for my clothes. In this space, I will make four wardrobes for my clothes, and a big mirror with them. I will use a wall to make a cabinet for shoes, and put all my shoes. There is a beautiful toilet (toilet是厕所的意思，用glass？)table behind them. The toilet table includes all of my glasses, sun glasses, and jewelry and so on. It is my dream room. I always see it in my dream. I hope tha