麻烦大家帮个忙:英文感谢信

Dear Uncle,

I am writing to you to express my sincere thanks to you. Owing to youe help, my summer vacation could be so wonderful and meaningful. The prcticed work at your factory made me understand the society and it was also a very good chance for me to make social practice. I also like to thank you very much for you being leading me to visit many interesting places. All of these made me have a very happy vacation.

With many greetings,

Minimico

I worked in my uncle's factory and wanted to thank for his offering a chance for me to practise in the society.
In addition ,he showed me around and gived me a lot of fun.
I was so appreciated for a fully summer.

Dear uncle
Thanks for giving me a chance of woking in your factor to practise in the society.And thanks for taking me to have fun ,I was very happy.I though this summer vacation was fully and happily because of I was with uncle.