UC知道急~~要考雅思了,作文一定要6,大家帮我看看我这篇能得几分
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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant’ examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, we may see a phenomenon that the payment of successful sports professionals is far more than the people who gain outstanding performance in other inportant professions. This has become a controversial issue in today’s society which obtains more accept and abuse.
As to the acceptable parts, reasons may be as following. Firstly, the sports professionals contribute to improve our country’s international image. Take Liu Xiang as an instance. Liu Xiang, the world record holder in 110 meter runing, conquerd people all around world and built the health, well-talented and brave image of Chinese people. Another main re
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant’ examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, we may see a phenomenon that the payment of successful sports professionals is far more than the people who gain outstanding performance in other inportant professions. This has become a controversial issue in today’s society which obtains more accept and abuse.
As to the acceptable parts, reasons may be as following. Firstly, the sports professionals contribute to improve our country’s international image. Take Liu Xiang as an instance. Liu Xiang, the world record holder in 110 meter runing, conquerd people all around world and built the health, well-talented and brave image of Chinese people. Another main re
我觉得这篇应该有5.5分
再努点力吧
既然都读完了 就给你一些个人的建议 应该不会介意吧~呵呵
注意单复数形式 不要小看这个 写错了单复数都会丢分的
这个是最容易避免的 细心点别在这个上失误
还有部分单词拼写错误 当然可能你敲的时候速度快没注意
另外 前面第二段有一个firstly 然后就找不到secondly、thirdly了 而后面用的是another reason 这个前后应该一致 要么前面就不要用firstly
最好上个培训班吧，那里有老师会指导的。
5分应该可以吧
6-7分