UC知道高手帮忙修改 六级作文
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mun ,is is hard working which leads you to success.
Genius is one per cent inspiration and ninety - nine per cent
perspiration,
which she loves me very much.she is too tired to gain weight.
she is so worried about me that she always calls me this
Thursday afternoon.I'm really worrying for her.
however, IThe thing that I worried most happened finally.The
life most regrettable matter, the nothing better than had
persisted should not persist, easily gave up not be supposed
actually to give up
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At that moment my mood is as bad / terrible as the weather.
for that text is terrible.
Go to hell! Damn you!
It was my fault that moment,I am sorry for my parrent .I'm
disappointed on myself
mother is verykind.i swear she can not feel disappointed with me forever.Because of my m
Genius is one per cent inspiration and ninety - nine per cent
perspiration,
which she loves me very much.she is too tired to gain weight.
she is so worried about me that she always calls me this
Thursday afternoon.I'm really worrying for her.
however, IThe thing that I worried most happened finally.The
life most regrettable matter, the nothing better than had
persisted should not persist, easily gave up not be supposed
actually to give up
(College/University Entrance Examination National College
Entrance Examination )
At that moment my mood is as bad / terrible as the weather.
for that text is terrible.
Go to hell! Damn you!
It was my fault that moment,I am sorry for my parrent .I'm
disappointed on myself
mother is verykind.i swear she can not feel disappointed with me forever.Because of my m
mun ,is is hard working which leads you to success.
第一句就错了
1.写了两个is
2.你是想写定语从句吧，可是先行词在哪呢？hard working 是什么？我不懂
妈咪，是主角您到成功的坚硬工作。 天才是百分之一启发和九十九个汗水，她爱我非常。 她太疲乏以至于不能增重。 她如此担心我她总告诉我这 星期四下午。 我为她真正地担心。 然而，事我担心最后最发生了。 生活多数遗憾的问题，好没什么比有 坚持不应该坚持，容易地放弃不是假想的 实际上放弃(学院或大学入学考试国民学院 入学考试)在那片刻我的心情是一样坏/可怕的象天气。 为那文本是可怕的。 见鬼! 咒骂您! 它是片刻，我为我的父母是抱歉的我的缺点。我是 失望在我自己母亲是非常亲切的。 我发誓她不能永远感觉失望对我。 由于我有我的母亲
你这是六级作文吗
我怎么看得像二级的
各种语法错误
恐怕改是改不了了
回去重写吧