我写的作文 文明观赛 谁能帮我挑点毛病

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/20 06:25:28
The cartoon contains what is really two conflicting events.Despite the athletic field, being so magnificent, is the stage of the athlete who is competing seriously for the honour and the spirit of swifter, higher, stronger, some spectators seem to be the authentic actor.a guy is scratching one of his bare foot. just by the side of him a man is eating a bowle of rice. what's more, a person is having a call loudly. Yes.it’s time for them to change.

why shuold these guys change?the cartoon tell us one of the point of a olympic's success is this: everybody shoule make sense of what the behavior of him is not just the behavior of him, and it is the image of all the people of the nation in olympic games.
Everybody should know he is not only a spectator who is watching the glory of the games,but also the glory’s essential portion.If he acts up, our nation could be humiliated befor the entire neighborhood.

How will these guys changes? In quite innovative ways

points

before

a common view of the beavior’s extend of harm for our nation

基本差不多

“everybody shoule make sense of what the behavior of him is not just the behavior of him,”him应该是his。还有好多单词拼错的地方,是打字打错的吧~