UC知道Dear Ann
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Ann, miss you so much.!How are you recently?
The day before yesterday, I left Baiyun Institute, say goodbye to the past two years of campus life. I miss campus life and also miss your classes. You are so humour, kindness, lovely and responsible. You remedy my faults of pronunciation and improve my English so much. Thank you again!!
Have you watch the TV or hear the song "Wecome to Beijing"? If you haven't hear this song, here is the website: http://news.beelink.com.cn/20080717/2554424.shtml
Now only four days away from the Olympic Games, I'm so exciting, how about you? Look forward for your reply.
Your sincerely
Benny
这是一封信，我写的，应该有错误，请高手指正！
PS：Ann是我的一个美国老师。
say goodbye to the past two years of campus life改成saying goodbye to the past two years of campus life或and said goodbye to the past two years of campus life。
humour改成humourous，kindness改成kind， remedy改成correct。
watch改成watched，hear改成heard。exciting改成excited。look forward for改成look forward to。
第二句加个主语I吧，I miss campus life and 后也加个主语最好， You are so humour，humour是名词这里要用形容词。kindness也是名词换成kind
Have you watch the TV or hear the song "Wecome to Beijing"? 这句拆一下吧，或者前一句去掉，Have you heard the song“Wecome to Beijing”
If you haven't hear this song。hear好像要用heard
Now only four days away from the Olympic Games
有点乱，改成It‘s only four days to the Olympic Games now.
如有不合适的地方见谅
Dear Ann,
Ann, I have missed you so much.!How are you recently?
The day before yesterday, I left Baiyun Institute,just to say goodbye to the past two years of campus life. I miss campus life and also miss your classes. You are so humour, kind, lovely and r