精通英语的大大请进来

There is a good news for the people of our city.A new car factory will be built here.There will have many new jobs for

works in

this new factory ,at least 150,000 cars will be made each year at

the begin.This number will grow large later to 300,000 cars will

supplied to people all over the country.Many new house will be b-

uilt,either.a new port near our city will be opened for foreign

ships,so cars will be sent by the sea.Many other new businesses

will all so be started,the city will become rich,and the workers

will have more jobs.So all the people are very pleasing.

这是一篇短文改错，有9个错误，请会的大大们指出错误，并写明在哪行，哪个错了，写出原词，后写您们改的，请大大们认真一些，希望您们给我发来的不是错误的！谢谢
至此鞠躬

1.第一行，去掉a，news为不可数名词
2.第二行，have改为be，there be句型的将来时there will be
3.第三行，works改为workers，工人
4.第五行，begin改为beginning，at the beginning刚开始
5.第六行，house改为houses，此处用复数
6.第七行，either改为too，表肯定用too
7.第八行，去掉the，by sea固定搭配
8.第九行，all so改为also
9.第十行，pleasing改为pleased，形容人的用-ed形式的形容词
这九个错误是很明显的，不过改完了觉得还是有错。

第1行：there is good news 没有a
第2行：there will be many，不是have
第5行：the beginning，不是begin；后面larger，不是large；30000 cars will be supplied，用被动语态
第6行：many new houses，复数
第7行：will be built, too。不用either
第8行：business，不可数名词
最后：very pleased

第二行have 改成be
第三行works 改成workers
第四行你要么在150，000后面加一个逗号，要么在at least
前加上and（连词）
第五行begin 改成beginning
第五行will后添be
第六行house改成houses
第七行either改成too
第八行rich 改成richer
最后一行pleasing改成pleased

There is a good news for the people of our city.A new car factory will be built here.There will have many new jobs for

works(working) in