UC知道这篇作文很烂，能得25分吗？
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44Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Contemporarily,there are so many people who like to traval with a companion,while others prefer to traval alone.For my part,I would like to travel with a companion.The reasons are as follows.
First of all,I will be dispointed when I am traveling alone.Few would dispute that nothing makes us happier than sharing the beauty with our friend or relatives,that is to say,even if the landscape is the most beautiful scene in the world,enjoying it alone may not cheer me up,it should be someone to be with me and takl about the feeling to each other,this is real traval and I can not extract the essence during the travel.
Furthermore,my companion and I may help each other if one of us is in trouble,such as wrenching feet or falling off.There is an impressive example I need to metion here.Once,I put a vis
Contemporarily,there are so many people who like to traval with a companion,while others prefer to traval alone.For my part,I would like to travel with a companion.The reasons are as follows.
First of all,I will be dispointed when I am traveling alone.Few would dispute that nothing makes us happier than sharing the beauty with our friend or relatives,that is to say,even if the landscape is the most beautiful scene in the world,enjoying it alone may not cheer me up,it should be someone to be with me and takl about the feeling to each other,this is real traval and I can not extract the essence during the travel.
Furthermore,my companion and I may help each other if one of us is in trouble,such as wrenching feet or falling off.There is an impressive example I need to metion here.Once,I put a vis
很多词用错,倒数第二段应该是disadvantage。
结构还算公正，论述思路也还比较清楚，论述有点单薄，但不能说是很烂，虽然还是不够完美。
主要问题是用词，语法和论述还是稍显简单和稚嫩，标点符号用的不够准确。
如果满分30分，我个人认为得分在20-23分之间，到不了25分，25分的文章，从句结构和标点，用词基本上都没什么错误而且要比较熟练才行。
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