各位英语高手.. 进来帮帮忙.. help~

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/28 17:04:25
时间this thursday,the next day
地点swimming pool,kelly’s home, hospital
人物 kelly,kelly’s mother,doctor Wang
病情a cough,aheadache,temperature is a little high
建议 take the medicine 3 times a day ,take a rest,drink a lot of water

kelly星期四在游泳池游泳后,由于水太冷,感冒了。第二天起床时,她妈妈发现kelly出现了咳嗽、头痛等不良现象。带来她去医院,王医生给kelly看了病,给出了建议,星期六那天 kelly病情有了好转,回到了学校。
要求;60~80字左右...

各位 帮帮我写这篇文章.... .. 谢谢~

After swimming in the swimming pool ,kelly got a cold because of the cold water .When kelly got up the next day ,his mother found that hekept coughing and had a headache .His mother took his temperature.She was worried the temperature was a little high .She took Kelly to the hospital at once .Mr wang looked Kelly over,and gave some advice to them ,"Take the medicine three times a day,and you should take a rest at home and drink a lot of water".Kelly did not got well until Saturday,then he went to school for class

这是初中的英语短文,同学.还是自己写把.找枪手没用...