谁能帮我纠正一下这份英语自我介绍？麻烦了……

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这份自我介绍是我自己写的，不知道有没有错，如果有错的话请纠正一下。另外可不可以帮我在哪个地方加上一句点睛之笔？可以是搞笑一点的。只要小学六年级～初一的水准就行了。

Good morning everybody!
My name is ***.I'm twelve years old.There are three people in my family:my parents and me. I like play badminton and computer games.
My dream is a author.
Thank you very much!

译文：
大家早上好！我的名字叫×××。我今年12岁了。我的家里有三口人：我的父母和我。我喜欢打羽毛球和电脑游戏。我的梦想是成为一名作家。

谢谢大家！

错了.
There are three people in my family:my parents and me应为
There are three people in my family:my parents and I
（我是初中毕业生，我们老师专门说过这个问题的）

I like play badminton and computer games. 应为
I like playing badminton and computer games.

My dream is a author. 应为
My dream is to be a author.

好了，改完了，

Good morning everyone!
My name is ***.I'm twelve years old. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. I like to play badminton and computer games.
My dream is to become an author.
Thank you everyone!

Good morning everybody!
My name is ***.I'm twelve years old.There are three people in my family:my parents and I. My father is a teacher.My mother is a doctor.I like play badminton and computer games.My dream is to be a author.
Thank you very much!

1 “喜欢”——用 like to do sth 或者 like doing sth
2 “My dream is a author.”你的这句话的意思是“我的梦是作家”！（“梦 是 作家。”）
3 “成为”用“become”或者“t