看看有什么错的地方。。。英语高手。

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/18 11:08:35
i saw the Olympia's opening ceremony in the TV on the Saturday.they said that the opening was very successful.all the world was able to join in a magnificent tribute and the Olympic spirit.and i saw many nationals delegations to witness this beautiful ceremony.everybody was seeing their heroes and national flag.there is about 204 countries joined in one place.there was an amazing and exciting opening ceremony.and the Beijing's Olympic was saying welcome,they do all the preparation.finally they was presenting all the Olympia's players and beginning the Olympia's games.and somebody said the world will remember this for a long time.

in the TV -on

on the Saturday-the去掉

nationals-national

i saw many nationals delegations to witness -to 去掉，were witnessing

Beijing's Olympic-Beijing

beginning the Olympia's games-began

感觉很混乱，我也是胡乱该的。

....from TV on Saturday.They........national delegations .....national flags.....there are about 204 countires.....

好像很多错误。 watch tv， this saturday ，无需加on 和the， they said ， thay 是谁呢？ 这个要明确， 不能直译，可以说it's said that 。the opening 可以改为it 或者后加上 ceremony ， 后面的很多 ，感觉还是自己仔细修改修改在贴上来。