急求高人翻译(汉译英),在线等!!采用另有加分!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/30 00:00:47
时间太快,我赶不上你
彼岸太远/世界太大,我触不着你
但当你或轻柔或激情地演唱
我感到你近在咫尺/触手可及
当你激情地舞动旋转
你是如此清晰明了

(两个“激情”,中文找不到合适的词,但希望翻译中不要重复)

你让世间的黑暗少一些,光明多一些
泪水少一些,欢笑多一些
悲伤少一些,快乐多一些
脆弱少一些,坚强多一些
恐惧少一些,信仰多一些
绝望少一些,希望多一些
伤痛少一些,爱多一些
你让世界成为更好的世界

愿你有一个自由而坚定的灵魂
愿你有美丽的生活

生日快乐!

要求:
1,谢绝翻译软件
2,最好翻译得贴切一点,应当能看出来我是写给别人的生日祝福,呵呵
3,如果能翻译的信达雅,视情况追分

不尽感谢!
谢绝翻译软件!!

I can't follow you because time is always running so fast
I can't touch you because the world is so big
But when you sing in gentle or with passion
I can feel you near my hand
when you dance around full of enthusiasm
you are so clear to see

Because of you ,the world has more light rather than darkness,
more laughter rather than tears
more happiness rather than sadness
more strength rather than weakness
more belief rather than fear
more hope rather than despair
and more love rathe than hurt
It's you who make the world become a better one

(At last ,)I wish your soul will be free but still
and your life will be colorful and wonderful

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY "WITH MY LOYAL WISH
给你多加了几个词,希望别介意

Time too fast, I can not keep up with you
The other side too far / World too much, I touch you不着
But when you or gentle or passion in concert