“希望能和你们成为好朋友”和“请多多指教”用英语怎么说

希望能和你们成为好朋友
I hope to become your good friends.

请多多指教
Please advise.

Let's be goodfriends.please do not hesitate to correct me when I make mistakes 多多指教英语就根本没这个说法，我以前问过一个老外了，但是有意思相近的，犯错时请指出来

我只会一个噢,这个是老师教我们的,说很有用噢,!
希望和你们成为好朋友:Let's be goodfriends.

And hope that you will become good friends, a lot of advice.
给你个网址,自己找吧:http://www.wwenglish.com/

I hope to become your good friends.
Please give your advice as much as possible.