帮忙找哈有无病句.也帮忙改一下.英语!

Dear Mr. Wu(写你们老师的姓):
I’m a student of yours. I like English very much. I am interested in speaking English and listening to the English songs. And sometimes I try to sing English songs, because I think it do good to improve the level of my English. Mr. Wu, can you make a list of some good songs and moives for me? Thus , I can learn more about spoken language.

我是一位高三学生，看了你的文章后有点小小的拙见，不知对不对。
1.所有的表示“我”的I都应该为大写。句子开头的第一个字母也都应该大写。
2.I'm try singing some easy English songs.我想你想表达“我正在寻找一些英文歌曲”。但是这个现在进行时中be doing句型的doing恐怕应该用在try上，因为try是及物动词。try的固定句型是try to do .所以这句话应该是I'm trying to sing some easy English songs.
3.Because I know that can improve my English. know是动词，动词后的从句是宾语从句。你的宾语从句中can improve my English缺少了主语I。即缺少了成分。that在宾语从句中不可以做成分，但是在定语从句中可以。所以应该改成Because I know that the English songs can improve my English.(宾语从句 ） Because I know the English songs that can improve my English.（定语从句）
4.i hope that you can suggest some good English songs and so