UC知道英语，是否判断哪句是我写的？
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以下AB两句英语的意思如中间汉语意思，其中有一句是书上的，另一句是我写的，是否判断哪句是我写的？其中有什么错，帮忙指出来！！！
A:the story here presented will be told by more than one pen, as the story of a crime against the laws is told in court by more than one witness-with the same object in both cases, to present the truth always in its most direct and most intelligible aspect.(故事将由多人讲述，以最直接最明了的方式揭露事件的真相，正如法庭上审判犯罪需要许多证人一样--两者都要达到同样的目的）
B:the story will be told by many people, to present the truth with most direct and most intelligible aspect.as it need many witness to tell a crime in Court--Both cases will achieve the same object.
A:the story here presented will be told by more than one pen, as the story of a crime against the laws is told in court by more than one witness-with the same object in both cases, to present the truth always in its most direct and most intelligible aspect.(故事将由多人讲述，以最直接最明了的方式揭露事件的真相，正如法庭上审判犯罪需要许多证人一样--两者都要达到同样的目的）
B:the story will be told by many people, to present the truth with most direct and most intelligible aspect.as it need many witness to tell a crime in Court--Both cases will achieve the same object.
当然B是你的了。
with most direct and most intelligible aspect.应为‘with the most direct and intelligible aspect'
to present最好改为presenting。
it need改为it needs.
witness改为witnesses.
看来B是您写的。
B was written by you.Right?
as it needs..........只找出这一个错误，呵呵，水平一般！
下面的
因为上面的很书面化，下面的形式看起来更像学生写的
嘛~我还才刚初中毕业，说不出哪错~
恩，B是你写的吧。
但是A的第一句里的“PEN”是你打错了八~
1 truth with “THE” most direct
2 aspect"."as it(不需要句号)
3 as it “needS”
4 need many “witnessES”
5 REACH the same object（不用ACHIEVE）
总的来说，你的翻译好象和原文有些出入，还是参照书上的比较好。