UC知道帮忙判一下我的英语作文谢谢(初一下学期)8分
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具体内容应包括1时间2说到达的地点及交通方式3所看到的景物4所做的事情5感受或收获
要求:意思连贯 符合逻辑,字数不少于60词.
In last saturday I goes to the tiananmen square.
morning,we are gat up early and had breakfast,past one hours
we are goes by car .In the noon we are gat on the tiananmen quare .It is very good!I can see the mozhedong's picture.In the afternoon we are ate the dinner in restaurter.It is very good.
finsh,we are goes home.this my favourite's day.
In last saturday I go to the tiananmen square.
In the morning,we got up early and had breakfast,past one hours
we went there by car .At the noon, we went to the tiananmen quare .It is very nice!I can see the mozhedong's picture.Later in the afternoon, we ate the dinner in restaurter.It is very delicious.
In the end,we returned home.We enjoy myself very much and I want to go there again!
这样该避免离你原来的错误也会在于以表达上比较好，原因我真得懒得说了，不过本人对自己的英语水平还是比较那啥的。
In last saturday I went to the Tiananmen Square.
In the morning,we got up early and had breakfast.An hour later
we left there by car .In the noon we went back to the Tiananmen Square .It was very fascinating!I could see the Maozhedong's picture.In the afternoon we ate the dinner in restaurant.It was very delicious!
In the end,we went home.This was my favourite day!
修改如上额。建议如下：
1.发生在过去，动词要用过去式的，包括情态动词！
2.特定的建筑物和人名要大写。还有开头第一个字母也要大写滴。
3.像morning、afternoon等词要加in the。
4.要