UC知道各位英语达人留步啊！~帮忙找找语法等方面错误·跪求……
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/31 18:57:50
我妹的暑假作业！帮忙看看~如下：
YOU ARE NOT ALONE
YOU ARE NOT ALONE.
YOU HAVE SO MANY FLOWERS
AND SO MANY FOND DREAMS.
THOUGH THE FLOWER WLII DIE ONE DAY,
WHEN THE SUN OUT,FOND DREAMS WLII GO AWAY.
YOU ARE NOT ALONE.
YOU HAVE SO MANY CLOSE FRIENDS
AND SO MANY GREAT IDEALS.
THOUGH THE FRIENDS SOMETIMES CAN'T UNDERSTAND YOU,
THE IDEALS MAY NOY COME TURE.
YOU ARE NOT ALONE.
YOU STILL HAVE ME.
THOUGH I AM NOT HERE WITH YOU.
BUT MY HEART WILL STANDING BEHIND YOU FOREVER.
CAN YOU FEEL IT?
不知道为什么只能打大写,符号好象也有点错,帮忙改改.偶赏的分不多,但拜托各位真的帮帮忙~(深深鞠躬ING~)
首先，这不是歌词，偶妹她的老师严格要求语法
然后，再帮忙看看标点应该怎么加好不~
YOU ARE NOT ALONE
YOU ARE NOT ALONE.
YOU HAVE SO MANY FLOWERS
AND SO MANY FOND DREAMS.
THOUGH THE FLOWER WLII DIE ONE DAY,
WHEN THE SUN OUT,FOND DREAMS WLII GO AWAY.
YOU ARE NOT ALONE.
YOU HAVE SO MANY CLOSE FRIENDS
AND SO MANY GREAT IDEALS.
THOUGH THE FRIENDS SOMETIMES CAN'T UNDERSTAND YOU,
THE IDEALS MAY NOY COME TURE.
YOU ARE NOT ALONE.
YOU STILL HAVE ME.
THOUGH I AM NOT HERE WITH YOU.
BUT MY HEART WILL STANDING BEHIND YOU FOREVER.
CAN YOU FEEL IT?
不知道为什么只能打大写,符号好象也有点错,帮忙改改.偶赏的分不多,但拜托各位真的帮帮忙~(深深鞠躬ING~)
首先，这不是歌词，偶妹她的老师严格要求语法
然后，再帮忙看看标点应该怎么加好不~
1.wlii 拼写错误，应该是will
THOUGH THE FLOWER WLII DIE ONE DAY,
WHEN THE SUN OUT,FOND DREAMS WLII GO AWAY.
2.noy 拼写错误，应该是not
THE IDEALS MAY NOY COME TURE.
3.standing应该改为stand
BUT MY HEART WILL STANDING BEHIND YOU FOREVER.
4.Though the flower应该改为though flowers.
5.Though the friends 应该改为Though friends.
6.The ideas 应该改为Ideas.
这个应该是根据Michale Jackson的那首You are not alone 的歌曲模仿写的一首歌词，其实对于歌词来说，根本不需要语法考虑的那么周全，只要大家都能听懂就ok了，很多英文原版的歌曲都是不怎么符合语法的。建议学习英语不要死抠着语法学，这样即辛苦又没有多少效果。