急~~急~~!哪位帮我修改一下英语作文?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/17 04:03:26
There are a lot of differences from America and China about education. We didn’t say which one is the better or which one is the worst. Just like an old word in America: Every coin has two sides. We only talk about some different in here. Chinese education system and education method are focus on one person, but America education system and education method are focus on one term. Chinese education system is training the scientist. It wants to let everyone become the scientist. But in fact, that’s impossible. We are learning the same class; we can’t choose the class which we like it. So I think Chinese student is the same student. Compared with Chinese education system, America education system pays more attention to the man diversity. Every student can choose their major which they are good at it. Every education system has their advantage and disadvantage, but both of them have one purpose: teach the knowledge to the student, let the student receive good education become a useful peop

1.There are a lot of differences from(from改为between) America and China about education.

2.We didn’t(don't)say which one is the better or which one is the worst(worse).

3.We only talk about some different(differences) in here

4.but America education system and education method are focus on one term(term???是team吗)
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5.we can’t choose the class which we like it(it 省略)

6.America(American后面文章里的也要改下,是美国的) education system pays more attention to the man diversity(diversity of the man)

7.Every student can choose their major which they are good at it(it 省略).

似乎整篇文章中倾向于说美国教育制度的好。。。跟你的观点有所出入

1.We couldn't say which one is the better or which one is the worst
2.We are learning in the same class
3let the student receive good education to become a useful people
4.
but both of them have only one purpose: teach the knowledge to the student
5.并且你的article最大的问题就是focus,这是一个动词或者名词