MY SUMMER HOLIDAY OF 2008为题写一篇短文

In this summer holiday ,I was very happy .I have been to QianL Park with my relations .And I watched TV ,The Olmpic Games .
We got up at 8:00 a.m that morning .Because the travel was coming .My uncle bought some noodles as our breakfast .It took our 1.5 hour to park by bus .
In the park ,we took photo as much as we cought .My sister ,brother and me picked many places to view which is took in photo by we .At 12:00 a.m we had lunch which is delicious food in the hotel .After had lunch ,my brother and sister want by boat ,but I was negative .So my uncle looked at them ,two dear children . Finally ,the three children play on the ground with bikes .
That time was 5:00 and it was time to go home .So me got on bus with happy .
Before the school time start ,I have to be in home .It's surprised :The Olmpic Games was start when I gone to home .So I watch it until school opens .

可能有些错误,但没办法
我只是读高二
而且是随便写的(临场发挥)

希望能够帮助您