判断下这句英语对不对,错的请指出,谢谢

不对.应该说Anyway ,I hope we can become good friends and improve our English

没问题。 anyway 拼错啦。 还有 we can all 换成 all of us can 要好些哦。还有 to improve 换成 and improve, 不然感觉是为了提高英语而做朋友，太功利。
Anyway I hope all of us can become good friends and improve our English together.

应该是
Anyway, I hope we all can become good friends to improve our English together.