UC知道请大家给我这篇托福作文打分~
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/25 20:03:59
As the development of the society,every generation of people is different in many ways,such as the way in which they think and the way in which they slove problems in the life,and the methods of their entainment and so on..
As we known,the old people are more conservative,for they used to live in fundel society,and this has an important impact on their ways of life,they may do everything carefully.On the other hand,as the older people may have experienced war time and they may lea a hard life then,so they cherish everything they own now and they never waste anything.However,the yong people are brought up in a peaceful society and they hardly experience hard life which their parent or grandparents have led,so they may take everything granted.However,nowdays,young men are also different from their elders in that,they are more willing to challenage themselves and try new things.This is good for the development of the yong people.
There is another difference between every gene
As we known,the old people are more conservative,for they used to live in fundel society,and this has an important impact on their ways of life,they may do everything carefully.On the other hand,as the older people may have experienced war time and they may lea a hard life then,so they cherish everything they own now and they never waste anything.However,the yong people are brought up in a peaceful society and they hardly experience hard life which their parent or grandparents have led,so they may take everything granted.However,nowdays,young men are also different from their elders in that,they are more willing to challenage themselves and try new things.This is good for the development of the yong people.
There is another difference between every gene
不会太低，只要你没跑题，我觉得应该是4分差不多，第一个reason好像少了点具体例证，还有就是语言还可以再润润色，老人可以用the elderly（老年人），The older generation（上一代人）之类的替换一下。祝你考试顺利~~
同学,你没有给出题目我没法评价你的作文,因为不知道你有没有偏题.怎么打分呢?
除了题目`~~ 语句蛮通顺的啊``