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I have the honor to present a brief introduction of myself to you .My name is XX.I was born in January 18th, 1987, at a smalltown of Hami city, Xinjiang Province. I graduate form the information management and information systems department of xxx University in July 2008.
Study UK is my dream . I like the British landscape, living environment, architectural style and long history. And i also think the university of UK have modern equipment and high-quality teaching. I hope it can improve my oral english and interpersonal skills. I like London very much, and I want to live there. I believe that would be make my life more interesting.
In past four years, i have acquired basic knowledge of management both in theory and in practice. But i think this is not enough, I hope I can continue to learning the knowledge of management. I am applying for a course in the studying of human resources manageme
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I 【have the honor】am honored to present a brief introduction of myself to you .My name is XX.I was born in January 18th, 1987, [at] in a small town of Hami 【city】 City, Xinjiang Province. I [graduate] graduated form the information management and information systems department of xxx University in July 2008.
Study （in the） UK is my dream . I like the British landscape, living environment, architectural style and long history. And 【i】 I also think 【the university】 （that） universities 【of】 in the UK have modern equipment and high-quality teaching. I hope it can improve my oral 【english】 English and interpersonal skills. I like London very much, and I want to live there. I believe that would [be] make my life more interesting.
In （the） past four years, 【i】 I have acquired （the） basic knowledge of management both in theory and in pr