英语作文 我曾经去过的地方

I have been to the Hai Nan with my parents this summer. It is a beautiful place. I enjoy the sunshine, the fresh air and the beach there. Living in there, you can keep in touch with tourists from all over the country. People there are quite hospitable and hardworking. I would like to go there again.
忘记初一学到什么水平了....这样可以吗