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The text talks about the effect of nature destruction by the first european inhabiants in Australian and aboriginal myth relating on the nature.
Firstly, the current situation is described, u can see skelektal remains of ring barked trees everywhere on the continent. The most dramatic concern is the destruction of forests and the possible following effects on climate.
The depression and drought in the 1880s reminds the settlers that the nature is taking revenge on its exploiters, those only take advantage without giving back.
One version of the myth says that the nature envirement has transformed the convicts who are deported to Australian into democrats and collectivists. They also helped the other settlers to create a kind of inter-colonial bush proletariat, the first political organisation which had been never existed before.
Another version includes the fight against the nature elements like flood, fire, drought and blacks by the f
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The text talks about the effects of natural destruction made by the first European inhabitants in Australia and aboriginal myth related to nature.
Firstly, the current situation is described; u can see skeletal remains of ring barked trees everywhere on the continent. The most dramatic concern is the destruction of forests and its potential negative effects on climate.
The depression and drought in the 1880s suggests the revenge taken by nature to its exploiters who only take advantage with the resource without giving back anything.
One version of the myth shows that the nature environment has transformed the convicts who are deported to Australia into democrats and collectivists. They also helped the other settlers to create a kind of inter-colonial bush proletariat, the first political organization which had never existed before.
Another version examines the fights against the nat