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do Ineternet bring us more confidence? the answer is negative. As the Internet and Internet media developed rapidly recent years, more and more people trust the news they get from the Internet which is considered as a standard of people's views,however,a survey of Internet news made by America recently proved that 45% of them is unbelievable.At the same time, half of troditional media's news accepted made people feel more reliable.
who should take the resposibility of the consequence,the Internet fans,the Internet itself or,some illegal action?
a large amout of message is passed by websites to attract Internet fans without checking and,some of the news we read is made by websites themselves.
At the same time,some media are running illegal news which is not belonged to their power.
the most important fact is tortuous act of news webs is becoming more and more serious.
According to the three points I have listed,the reason of