语言学题目 希望高手作答

下面是题目
做的好的话 俺再加分拉~~~
I. please rephrase the follwoing sentence s, to remove any improprieties in them:

1.the japanese mountaineer sent us the full story of his rescue from Tibet.
2.After correcting the errors, your second term paper is much better than your first one.
3.the football match will be held, if it won't rain the day after tomorrow.
4.she said that she would come if she cound and not to wait for her.
5.flying airplanes can be dangerous.
6.walking in the park, the trees are so verdant and the followers so beautiful.
7.a wheel of the car was broken.
8.In Dreser's Sister Carrie,he describes a penniless girl's way to success.
问题都不难的,主要是 我觉得里面有些如果只是remove的话,我好象做不到...
II:rephrase the following sentence using the given phrases in the brackets
1.not a day comes that doesnot make a change(but what)
2.since i've chose the enterprise, i'm determined to work as hard ad i can.(in as much as)<

网络安全的一些题目，请高手作答，十分感谢 C语言编辑的题目～在线等～请高手作答 英语语言学论文题目 C++题目,希望高手帮忙 语言学可以写什么题目 语言学高手进..... 请求语言学高手帮忙 请问英语语言学高手 中国语言学高手进 一道高中化学，很复杂的题目，请化学高手作答，谢谢！