UC知道帮改一篇英语文章,急
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请帮我看下这个文章中有没有错误或不好的地方
这是一篇高一生加入学校 英语爱好者协会 面试用的自我介绍文
Hello,everyone!It's really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.I am
confident that I can succeed. Now I will introduce myself.
My name is ....I am a student of Class1,Grade1.I spend most of my time on study, and I like English best. I have lots of interest,such as lisrening to music,reading books,swimming and so on.And I am good at penmanship.
I feel that my strongest merit is my ability to stick to things get them done.And I will set myself some goals,and try to achieve them. I have a dream that I hope we can bring up and enjoy the happiness together.
That's all.Thank you.
这是一篇高一生加入学校 英语爱好者协会 面试用的自我介绍文
Hello,everyone!It's really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.I am
confident that I can succeed. Now I will introduce myself.
My name is ....I am a student of Class1,Grade1.I spend most of my time on study, and I like English best. I have lots of interest,such as lisrening to music,reading books,swimming and so on.And I am good at penmanship.
I feel that my strongest merit is my ability to stick to things get them done.And I will set myself some goals,and try to achieve them. I have a dream that I hope we can bring up and enjoy the happiness together.
That's all.Thank you.
我觉得挺好的，不觉得此文哪里啰嗦。开场白是一定要的，而且开场白的好坏也显示着英文水平如何。
I have lots of interest, interest后应该加S吧。
基本就没什么毛病，我暂时没看出来。
高一有这水平已经不错了！
It's really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.I am confident that I can succeed. Now I will introduce myself. 这一部分可以去掉，太啰嗦了，而且场合也不对。
三楼的有毛病，他男扮女装！他是男的，他想性.交
而且他的COCK上有病菌，好像是什么爱滋病，他自己说的！
三楼的就是男扮女装，我也看出来了！
He's attired in female dress
Fuck him!