英语面试自我介绍,大哥大姐帮忙找错(谢谢....)

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明天就要面试,很着急的,刚刚写的份简单介绍.希望哪个高手帮忙找下错误和缺点,本人感激不尽....分多少都可以给...交朋友也可以
下午好各位
很荣幸能有这次面试的机会.
我的名字叫//,我1985年出生的,我来自江苏.我毕业于江苏工业学院,我的专业是化学工程与工艺.大学期间,我大部分时间用来学习,获得了英语四级证书和计算机2级证书,并多次获得学校的奖学金.课余时间我注重与同学老师的交往,我是个随和的人,所以和他们关系都很好.我喜欢运动,跑步篮球什么的.我觉得身体健康是很重要的.
我是一个容易相处的人,喜欢和别人多交流,所以大学里我个同学老师的关系都很好
我的介绍完了,谢谢给我这次机会.
Good afternoon.
i am very glad to be here for this interview.
my name is…,i am 24 years old .i come from jiangsu province,southeast of china. I was graduated from Jiangsu Polytechnic University,and my major is chemical engineering and technology.in the past 4 years,i spend most of my time on study,i have passed CET4. and i have acquired basic knowledge of my major.during my university i got the scholarship three times .
in my spare time ,i like basketball, running and chinese chess. I think that body is very important for everyone.
I am a easy-going boy and good at making communication with people so that I can build good interpersonal relations

i graduated from XXX
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i think that health is very important...
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Good afternoon.
i am very glad to be here for this interview.
my name is…,i am 24 years old .i come from jiangsu province,southeast of china. I graduated from Jiangsu Polytechnic University,and my major is chemical engineering and technology.in the past 4 years,i spent most of my time on study,i have passed CET4. and i have acquired basic knowledge of my major.during four-year period i have got the scholarship three times .
in my spare time ,i like basketball, running and chinese chess. I think that health is very important for everyone.
I am an easy-going boy and good at communicating with people so that I can build good interpersonal relationships with classmates and teachers.
That’s all. Thank you for giving me the chance.
仔细看了下 语言组织还不错
有些简单的错误帮您改正了下
这里应该多谈一下你专业的优势

真巧我明