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10月的北京气候宜人，在成功举办2008奥运会之后，北京更加美丽。您不仅可以看到著名的长城（the Great Wall）、故宫（The Forbidden City），还可以近距离欣赏鸟巢（the Olympic Stadium – the Bird’s Nest）和水立方（Water Cube）。

Beijing’s October is coming with pleasant climate. Especially after the superb 29th Olympic is successfully held, Beijing becomes more and more beautiful. You can go and see the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Olympic Stadium-Bird’s Nest and the Water Cube.

10月的北京气候宜人，
在成功举办2008奥运会之后，北京更加美丽。您不仅可以看到著名的长城（the Great Wall）、故宫（The Forbidden City），还可以近距离欣赏鸟巢（the Olympic Stadium – the Bird’s Nest）和水立方（Water Cube）。

The weather of Beijing in Oct is pleasant.
Beijing is becoming more beautiful after holding the 2008 Olymplcs games successfully.You could not only see the famous great wall,The Forbidden City,but also appreciate the Olympic Stadium – the Bird’s Nest and Water Cube in a shorter distance.

10月的北京气候宜人，在成功举办2008奥运会之后，北京更加美丽。您不仅可以看到著名的长城（the Great Wall）、故宫（The Forbidden City），还可以近距离欣赏鸟巢（t