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I used to think that television is only a tool which introduces the world to me. Until one day, I saw myself on the television screen.

That time I was at my 4th grade and took part in a talk show representing of my school. Even though I lost the champion by only 1 point, I was happy about my performance. The other day I saw the rebroadcast and found that my brilliant speech was relentlessly cut away, only some cliché was left. I was annoyed by the editor of the program. But then I suddenly realized that Television was not only an entertainment, but also the stage that show off ourselves---------at least through two ways: one is directly putting ourselves on the screen; the other one is presenting the best part to the audience via editing.

I was touched by the thought. A month later, my first editing software---Ulead Videostudio 5 moved into my PC. Since then my computer was no longer a game machine and become much busier than the era when conquered

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