这个英语句子哪里错了？为什么？

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/28 12:08:22
I visited Beijing for three times while I was in secondary school. The first time was so I could participate in a competition. The other two times I came to the city on holiday with my parents.

1.for three times 应与完成时搭配
2.The first time was so I could participate in a competition-----典型的Chinglish，你是不是直接用金山翻译的啊
3.The other two times I came to the city on holiday with my parents改为I came to the city with my parents on holiday in 2ed and 3rd

The other two times
这个说法不对
应该说 the second and the third

I had visited..
The first time was participating a competition
.... went to city ...

I have visited Beijing three times when I was in secondary school.The First time was that I participated a competition. Then the second and the third time, I went to the city to have my holidays with my parents.
我乱翻的= =

I have visited Beijing for three times while I was in secondary school. The first time was to participate in a competition. The others I came to the city for holiday with my parents

晕啊，
这是只有中国人才看得懂的中国式英语，MAKE NO SENSE！
你应该是要说：我中学的时候去过北京3次。第一次是我去参加一个比赛。另外两次是我在假期和我父母去的。
哎。
I have been to Beijing for thr