英语作文 The teacher 这样写对吗？

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我的作文题目是The teacher 但我写的内容是如下 帮我看看会不会扣题 错很多
My English teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. There is always a smile on her face.
Miss Huang likes singing. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is a good dancer, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing. Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favorite color is blue, because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

应该没问题,但题目最好是MY ENGLISH TEACHER.这是我个人的想法

福鼎市

总体来说没有语病。最好把 the dog is very friendly and cute改成the dogs are very friendly and cute

friendly一般是形容人的，用于狗有点...

修改的错误全在作文中了，还有的单词打错了

My English teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. she always smiles .
Miss Huang likes singing. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is a good dancer, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing. Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite colour is blue, because blue is the colour of the sky and the sea.

对