帮忙看看话说的对不对

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汤姆，请把那个视频与我分享一下好吗？

Hi Tom, Please share that video with me ok?

看起来是没什么问题,不过好像不够礼貌

或者:

Tom, would you please share that video with me?

语法是没错
但是老外不这么说话的
因为这样很不礼貌~

最好改成

TOM, WOULD YOU PLEASE SHARE THE VIDEO WITH ME?

可以是可以
用 would you please 或 do you mind 提问更好些吧

sentence is ok,no problem

对的