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There have been 13 deaths that have been linked to the Maple Leaf food plant. According to the CTV news reported about Maple Leaf foods and the listeriosis outbreak, the most likely source of the listeriosis outbreak was an accumulation of bacteria "deep inside" the components of two machines. The public health agency 13 deaths with 6 more under investigation. Furthermore, maple leaf foods president hoe people can trust maple leaf again.

I think no matter what the policy of procedure is, as long as there is a human element, there will always be a potential for this kind of handling this and when this is all cleared up, people should continue to buy their products. I also think that this doesn't need to go to court. The victims are approached by Maple Leaf and given appropriate compensation for their loss to help their families. I think that is enough.

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There have been 13 deaths linked to the Maple Leaf food plant. According to the CTV news about Maple Leaf foods and the listeriosis outbreak, the most possbile source of the listeriosis outbreak was an accumulation of bacteria "deep inside" the parts of two machines. The public health agency reported 13 deaths already and 6 more cases are under investigation. Furthermore, maple leaf foods president hope people can trust maple leaf again.

I think no matter what the policy of procedure is, as long as there is a human element, there will always be a potential for this kind of “human error” and after this is all cleared up, people should be able to continue to buy their products. I also think that it is unnecessary to go to court. The victims are approached by Maple Leaf and have been given compensation for their loss to help their families. I think that is enough.

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