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Today I went Safe Park, it was a beautiful place, there was greens, and there was water. and I was on the sampan on the water. look up the blue sky and white cloud. It was beautiful.

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Today I went Plam Isiand with school. The Palm Island look it form sky it was coco, and on the Palm Isiand every place were beautiful villa and it very big, I want live in the villa, but it was too expentive. When I grow up I will buy one!!!

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Today I went International City, there just some house did not have any especial, the diifferece is there were difference country have a difference place building house. there were China, Morocco, Persia, Greece, France, Spain, ltaly, Russia, England. And those house were near the Dragon Mart, I never want live there.

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Today I went to City Center in the Dubai, it was very big, and many people in here, shopping, I with my mother wander inside, we did not buy anything. because mother did not need buy anythi

1.Today I went to Safe Park, it was a beautiful place. It was green everywhere, and there was water. I got on the sampan in the water and looked up at the blue sky and white clouds. It was beautiful.

2. Today I went to Plam Isiand under school orgnization.There was cocos on the Palm Island looking down from the sky , and big villaes everywhere. I want to live in the villa, but it was too expensive. When I grow up I will buy one!!!

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Today I went to the International City. There were just some houses and nothing special. The only diifferece is that different countries have different places to building houses,including China, Morocco, Persia, Greece, France, Spain, ltaly, Russia and England. And those houses were near the Dragon Mart. I don't want to live there.

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Today I went to the City Center in Dubai.It was very big, and many people were doing shopping there. My mother and I had a visit inside, but we did not buy anything. Beca