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Penelope Cruz modeled the TV commercial of L’Oreal cosmetics. She represented beautiful and skin-friendly images of the L’Oreal’s product. This TV commercial gets the viewers attention and increases their interest in L’Oreal’s products. Repeated commercials create desire among consumers to be like Penelope Cruz. Once her beautiful image with the product is strongly memorized to viewers, viewers actually purchase the product. For another example, Britney Spears modeled Pepsi’s TV commercial, which was broadcasted in several countries. She represented Pepsi’s fresh and trendy images in the commercial; As a consequence, Pepsi’s local and overseas branches sales increased.
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2 products, got
3 views',increased
4 created the desire ,who wanted to be
5 products,is->was,to->by,purchased
6 products
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Pepsi’s sales on (both) local and overseas increased.
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modeled - acted in
of L'Oreal - for
beautiful - the beautiful
product - products
viewers - viewers'
desire among consumers to be like - desires among consumers to want to be like
with the product - as well as the product
is strongly memorized to viewers - are strongly planted in the viewers' brains
actually - will actually
product - products
modeled - was in
represented - charactorized
As a consequence - Consequently
branches sales - sales
开头就错了。 这样的开头就是中式英文了。
还有外国人讲究一次到底的写法。 都是讲证据的。在这里找不到你的evident and analysis
She is a beautiful image representitive for the L’Oreal, w