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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/21 17:12:28
According to the article, Goodyear Tire&Rubber Company has formed a new organization which is a strategic business unit (SBU), it is combined two regions of Goodyear’s current market. One region is European Union (EU), another is Eastern Europe, Middle East and Africa (EEMEA). After the formation of new business unit, the new corporation will become one of the biggest market places to generate sales revenue for the company.
Robert J. Keegan, company’s chairman and CEO, announces that the two region’s combination will use a new market strategy for the new EU member states. The purpose of this new organization is to increase and maximum company’s benefits through an easy, fast and consistent way in the customer and market area.
The leader of the new SBU is appointed to Arthur de Bok, former president of region EU. He has joining the company after a 13 years career in Procter&Gamble. Keegan said:” Since becoming president of the EU, Arthur has led a successful market

it is combined two regions of Goodyear’s current market. -->it combined

One region is European Union (EU), another is Eastern Europe, Middle East and Africa (EEMEA).--> one is the European Union (EU), and the other is Eastern Europe, Middle East and Africa (EEMEA).

Robert J. Keegan, company’s chairman and CEO --> the company’

The purpose of this new organization is to increase and maximum
company’s benefits through an easy --> increase and maximize

consistent way in the customer and market area. --> consistenct way through customers and the marketing area.

He has joining the company after a 13 years career in Procter&Gamble.--> He has joined the company after a 13-years career in Procter&Gamble.

Since becoming president of the EU, Arthur has led a successful market driven approach to --> ever since becoming president

Past couple of years, --> during the past couple of years/ or