书面表达:TOM每天不能按时上交老师布置的作业,请你给他写几条建议(至少5条),建议要合情合理.

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1.You should listen the teacher in the class more carefully.
2.You should brush up everyday.
3.You should make your mother to be the supervisor to look after you.
4.You should watch TV or play the computer game after you finish your homework.
5.You should bring your homework to school every day.

I hope you will be hand in your homework ontime.And then you will become a good student in one day.

your teacher

1.As long as you can every day classes seriously, it will work well done
2.You should not have, at any time ask the teacher, the teacher will help you to solve
3.You can go home after the completion of your homework
4.You should play in a timely manner after the completion of your operations

Finally, I also hope that you will be able to be completed on time every day of your homework, and I hope you do not pay to work, then give up the habit, I believe you are very good

Your teacher