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This is my first time particpates in English Super League. Before then, I didn't know something about this. Then I surved the net and looked up the English Super League. I saw many photos. In photos, many children were preparing the competition very nervous. Everyone was lovely, and I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate the English Super League now. I think I will be happy like them. I will have an appointment with English Super League.
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This is my first time (to particpate) in English Super League. Before then, I didn't know (anything) about this. Then I (searched on) the net and looked up the English Super League. I saw many photos. In(these) photos, many children were preparing (for)the competition (nervously). Everyone was lovely, (but) I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate (in)the English Super League now. I think I will be (also) happy (as) them. I will have an appointment with English Super League.
This is my first time particpates（不加s） in （the） English Super League. Before then, I didn't know something（改为anything） about this. Then I surved the net（made an online-survey） and looked up the English Super League. I saw many photos. In （those） photos, many children were preparing the competition very nervous（加ly）. Everyone was lovely, and I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate （in） the English Super League now. I think I wil