下面这段话这样翻译英文行么？

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本文介绍了使用电路解析、数值解析、电磁界解析相结合的方法来分析磁性材料的小磁滞回线现象对平面电感器性能所产生的影响的解析手法。此分析结果将有助于我们进行平面电感器的最优化设计，使之更加小型化高效率化，从而满足新一代移动IT机器的要求。

This paper describes a new solution that use the circuit analysis, data processing, electromagnetic analysis to approach the phenomenon of minor loop of the magnetic material on planar inductor . the results of this solution will help us to carry out the planar inductor Optimized design, make it more smaller and efficient, so as to meet the require of the next generation of mobile IT equipment.

总体来说不错！注意细节，如首字母大写等
论文的英文摘要一般是过去式，多用被动语态。我的你参考一下！

This paper described a new solution that uses the circuit analysis, data processing and electromagnetic analysis to approach the phenomenon of minor loop of the magnetic material on planar inductor. The results of this solution will help us to carry out the planar inductor Optimized design, and make it more smaller and efficient, so as to meet the require of the next generation of mobile IT equipment.

This paper describes a new solution that use the circuit analysis, data processing, electromagnetic analysis to approach the phenomenon of minor loop of the magnetic material on planar inductor . the results of this solution will help us to carry out the planar inductor Optimized design, make it more smaller and efficient, so as to meet the require of the next generation of mobile IT equipment.