短文改错(每行一个错误)

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1.My mother took me to school in the first day.We
2.saw many parents with their children in the front
3.of the teaching building.Soon a teacher came and led them
4.to some classrooms.Then some children began to
5.cry as the parents were not allowed the classrooms.
6.I did not cry when I have to go to kindergarten
7.ago.It was an enjoyable time for me as I got to know
8.some friends,so some children continued to cry.
9.Soom most children were laughed and playing
10.together.Finally the bell rang for us to go to home.

1. in→on
2. in the front→in front(去掉the)
3. √
4. Then→But
5. allowed与the之间加into
6. have→had
7. ago→before
8. so→but
9. laughed→laughing
10. go to home→go home
个人觉得,楼主打字时可能还有点问题,因为句意前后不太通顺,希望以后小心仔细对待学习。

1.My mother took me to the school in the first day.We
2.saw many parents with their children in front
3.of the teaching building.Soon a teacher came out and led them
4.to some classrooms.Then some children began to
5.cry as the parents were not allowed to classroom.
6.I did not cry when I had to go to kindergarten
7.ago.It was an enjoy time for me as I got to know
8.some friends,so some children continued to crying.
9.Soom most children were laughing and playing
10.together.Finally the bell rang for us to go home.

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