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Advantages and disadvantages of taking a part-time job
As we all know,many students at college often take part-time jobs in their spare time.Taking a job can makes a student's life more fulfilled and more comfortable. But it can also occupy our study time and take more energy.
First,if a student takes a part-time job, he or she will have more social experience than the one who doesn't.Taking a job will make one's life more fulfilled because they don't have so much idle time. Second, they will earn money from the job, so they can buy things that they want more freely. That makes their lives more comfortable. Third, taking a part-time job also has disvantages. It occupies one's study time, they have to spend time on doing the job, so there will be less time spent on their study. Forth, taking a job will certainly take our energy, and we are more easy to get ill or tired.
In my opinion, though taking a part-time job has its advantages and disadvantage