More Precious Than Money 英语作文

【上面的词语有些不正确，形容不恰当~我稍微修改了一下！】
Love is more precious than money
As we know that, money plays a great role in our lives. Lots of people think that money can be anything,especially teenagers.All of them think ,money can let them get what ever they want!
In fact, it's true that people can't live without money.But do you think that money can replace the love? In my opinion, Ithink that is ‘NO'!The reason I chose ‘NO’because love is more precious than wealth.As the proverb says‘There is only one happiness in life—to love and be loved'.
Without love, there is no point of living. Even though that you got enough money to use, but true love can not be bought.
For instance, a successful businessman devotes himself to the career so that he ignores his family. Although his house is decorated very beautiful that nobody’s can compare with it, there are no laughs and happiness in the house. The couple married for the money. For them, their family are not