请问一下翻译，怎样较好？

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/16 21:32:27
Love and knowledge, so far as they were possible, led upward reward the heavens. But always pity brought me back to earth. Echoes of cries of pain reverberated in my heart.

This has been my life. I have found it worth living, and I would gladly live it again if the chance were offered to me.

获得爱情和知识有的时候能使你如置天堂，但是一些遗憾的现实使你你知道你身在人间。
痛苦的声音在我的心里回荡。这曾经是我的生活。我发现这些生活很有意思，如果能让我再来一次的话我还是会选择这样的生活

（没有结合原文不知道翻译的好不好，不好的话请指出，好的话请加分，多谢 ）