求英文高手帮忙写个专业介绍

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/04 16:41:14
明天要复试了,我自我介绍还没弄好!
求大家帮忙弄一下机械专业介绍。
Second, i will introduce my major in the university.My major is Mechanical Engineering in our school........下面介绍一下我对本专业的看法,制造业是一个古老的行业,是国民经济的命脉,我们学习研究它也有很大的发展空间。我从小便对一些简单机械结构产生了浓厚的兴趣,上大学后我便沉迷于本专业知识,通过我的刻苦努力,今天终于有这个机会来此面试,希望在本院导师的引导下,自己在这方面有更大的发展。
大致是想表达这个意思,怎么说好就怎么说吧。望大家不要用翻译机,求高手们帮我整理修改一下,适当再在内容上扩展一点,力求口语化。麻烦大家了,先给大家说声谢谢!

Secondly, I would like to introduce my major in the university.My major is Mechanical Engineering.As you know machinery manufacturing is an old industry,and is the foundation of civil economy, so there is great development space for us to study it. From my childhood I had been interested strongly in some simple mechanical mechanism, and in the period of university I wallowed in the machinery professional knowledge even more. And through my hard work I get this interview opportunity here, I do hope that under the instruction of the teachers of our school I will get even more development in this field.
说明1)“命脉”改为了“基础”
2)“制造业”改为了“机械制造业”
3)“结构”改为了“机构”

Now I'd like to give some opinions of my major.Manufacture is a traditional industry.It is the lifeline of the national economy.Its study space is also huge.

Since very young,I was interested in some simple mechanical structures,and was fancinated in mechanical knowledges after I went to univers