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“Just let it die ,with no goodbye,details don't matter ,we both paid the price ”the beautiful melody into my ears.And I was impressed.Then I fall in love with her.
She is a professional singer in the world. And she can make music beautiful and soothing to the ear or strident and cacophonous.I like to listen to her songs.Her songs always let me become joyful.And her looks just like the song, one unforgettable!She is so unbelievable,and she put all of every song perfectly.
And she is my favorite singer who is named mariah carey.
(这是关于我最爱的歌手的文章,希望大家多多改造不好的、还有,我是初四的学生)

the beautiful melody into my ears -> the beautiful melody came into my ears

Then I fall in love with her -> Then I fell in love with her.

a professional singer in the world -> a professional singer of the world (one of the most professional singer in the world)

Her songs always let me become joyful -> Her songs always make me joyful.

And her looks just like the song -> And she looks just like her song

one unforgettable -> unforgettable

and she put all of every song perfectly -> and she sings all of her songs perfectly (and she interpretes every song so perfectly)

“Just let it die ,with no goodbye,details don't matter ,we both paid the price ”the beautiful melody came into my ears.And I am impressed.Then I fall in love with her.
She is a professional singer in the world. And she can make music beautiful and soothing to the ear without strident or cacophonous.I like to listen to her